Adrenaline coursed through my body as the horn sounded. I
began to push the bobsleigh along with my teammates, going quicker and quicker
until the world was just a blur. We jumped in. I ducked down, leaning at every
turn until we hit the steepest part of the Olympic run. I held my breath, not daring
to speak. We were moving very fast when suddenly, everything went wrong.
Spencer missed the turn completely. I felt the impact as we hit the frozen wall
of the track. My helmet made an unnerving sound as it made contact with the
ice. Everything went black.
Hi Neon Orange, another great piece of writing. Your description and pace is fantastic. I really like your use of long and short sentences. Great short story for 100 words. I'm a fan.
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Nagoya, Japan.